Lucia as a protagonist is interesting to me only if it gives the characters more pressure, not just more trailer drama.
Lucia and Jason need scenes where trust, fear, bad timing, and loyalty actually matter. If the story only jumps from set piece to set piece, the characters risk becoming cool posters instead of people players argue about.
The parts worth separating:
- whether supporting characters feel like people or mission devices
- what the scene says about Lucia and Jason when nobody is shooting
- whether conflict comes from motives, pressure, or simple plot convenience
Коротко по-русски: В сюжете важны не только большие ограбления и погони. Нужны сцены, где видно характер, ошибки, доверие и давление на персонажей.
So I would put the question this way: What would make Lucia as a protagonist feel important rather than just interesting? What would be the next useful confirmation? What choice would this affect for you?
Lucia and Jason need scenes where trust, fear, bad timing, and loyalty actually matter. If the story only jumps from set piece to set piece, the characters risk becoming cool posters instead of people players argue about.
The parts worth separating:
- whether supporting characters feel like people or mission devices
- what the scene says about Lucia and Jason when nobody is shooting
- whether conflict comes from motives, pressure, or simple plot convenience
Коротко по-русски: В сюжете важны не только большие ограбления и погони. Нужны сцены, где видно характер, ошибки, доверие и давление на персонажей.
So I would put the question this way: What would make Lucia as a protagonist feel important rather than just interesting? What would be the next useful confirmation? What choice would this affect for you?