Satire in the story is interesting to me only if it gives the characters more pressure, not just more trailer drama.
It starts by admitting what we do not know yet, then looking at the details that would be hard to fake in the final game: how systems interact, how the world reacts, and whether making the story feel human gives players something to do rather than something to argue about.
Lucia and Jason need scenes where trust, fear, bad timing, and loyalty actually matter. If the story only jumps from set piece to set piece, the characters risk becoming cool posters instead of people players argue about.
Русский вывод: В сюжете важны не только большие ограбления и погони. Нужны сцены, где видно характер, ошибки, доверие и давление на персонажей.
That is why I would rather discuss one concrete thing: How could satire in the story make the story more human? What would confuse a new player here?
It starts by admitting what we do not know yet, then looking at the details that would be hard to fake in the final game: how systems interact, how the world reacts, and whether making the story feel human gives players something to do rather than something to argue about.
Lucia and Jason need scenes where trust, fear, bad timing, and loyalty actually matter. If the story only jumps from set piece to set piece, the characters risk becoming cool posters instead of people players argue about.
Русский вывод: В сюжете важны не только большие ограбления и погони. Нужны сцены, где видно характер, ошибки, доверие и давление на персонажей.
That is why I would rather discuss one concrete thing: How could satire in the story make the story more human? What would confuse a new player here?