Trust between main characters is interesting to me only if it gives the characters more pressure, not just more trailer drama.
It starts by admitting what we do not know yet, then looking at the details that would be hard to fake in the final game: how systems interact, how the world reacts, and whether connecting story to the world gives players something to do rather than something to argue about.
Lucia and Jason need scenes where trust, fear, bad timing, and loyalty actually matter. If the story only jumps from set piece to set piece, the characters risk becoming cool posters instead of people players argue about.
Коротко по-русски: В сюжете важны не только большие ограбления и погони. Нужны сцены, где видно характер, ошибки, доверие и давление на персонажей.
For me the thread comes down to this: How could trust between main characters make the story more human? What would be the next useful confirmation? What would make this a useful forum thread?
It starts by admitting what we do not know yet, then looking at the details that would be hard to fake in the final game: how systems interact, how the world reacts, and whether connecting story to the world gives players something to do rather than something to argue about.
Lucia and Jason need scenes where trust, fear, bad timing, and loyalty actually matter. If the story only jumps from set piece to set piece, the characters risk becoming cool posters instead of people players argue about.
Коротко по-русски: В сюжете важны не только большие ограбления и погони. Нужны сцены, где видно характер, ошибки, доверие и давление на персонажей.
For me the thread comes down to this: How could trust between main characters make the story more human? What would be the next useful confirmation? What would make this a useful forum thread?